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Yuxi ([personal profile] esperesa) wrote2012-02-23 11:48 pm

[Malrennan's Fall] Rewrite, chapter 1 22-28

Back to the dude who may or may not be a good Samaritan. You might spot some recycling if you followed this before - if not, forget I said anything, ho-hum.


In which Sergei reminisces about days past and Anahon's anticipation makes him edgy.

Warning for a wee bit of gore.

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[personal profile] keoni 2012-02-29 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
This really is a great format for a story! I clicked it and then did a little double-take as suddenly those eyes were staring at me, which was kind of creepy, but awesome all the same. It drew me right in.
I loved all of it, you did a great job!