Beth! Thank you! :D Oh, the 'interesting' bit: I was frustrating myself into a tizzy over the first version, because I'd written everything in a descriptive way (as in characters just talking about the events instead of them actually *happening*) instead of 'show, don't tell'... if that makes sense. I wanted to slap that out most of all. Argh, I'm still catching up with Sessions; I feel bad about not being able to understand the dynamics between the characters as well as I'd want to yet. XD
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Oh, the 'interesting' bit: I was frustrating myself into a tizzy over the first version, because I'd written everything in a descriptive way (as in characters just talking about the events instead of them actually *happening*) instead of 'show, don't tell'... if that makes sense. I wanted to slap that out most of all.
Argh, I'm still catching up with Sessions; I feel bad about not being able to understand the dynamics between the characters as well as I'd want to yet. XD