[Malrennan's Fall] Prologue (rewritten)

[esperesa]

Okay well, I'll just leave this here. Here's the reworked version of the first few pages for Malrennan's Fall. I like to think it looks more interesting this way. There is only one real plot difference and it's not all that important, but, you know. Pretties.

The old version looked like this, for those who would like to see it: Page 1, page 2.

- Beta'd by Phoen. Thanks babe. <3



Warning for gore. As in dead people. Again.









* Malnourishment and ascites can cause extreme bloating of the abdominal captivity due to the accumulation of fluids (oedema).

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Comments

[simsarenotfood]

Wow this is gorgeous, the pictures and the plot and everything, I can't wait for the next part! :)

[esperesa]

Thank you! I'll try not to take too long. XD