[Malrennan's Fall] Rewrite, chapter 1 1-9

[esperesa]

Hmm. It's been a bit quiet here, mostly because I wanted to finish this before posting anything else. First part of the rewrite of the first chapter. Not much to say about it, except that it's not beta'ed yet because I don't want to bug mah girl in middle of the night and I just wanted the thing online.

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[(Anonymous)]

Wonderful chapter!))) The pictures are magnificent)

[esperesa]

Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

[mjspice]

<3!!!!!!!!

[esperesa]

:DDD

[lovehappyweekend]

MY HAPPINESS IS IMMENSE AND OVERFLOWING

Thank you for this awesome update! (Also- is it silly if I say I really adored your still life shots. And that rain scene! <3)

[esperesa]

Hohoho, I'm glad to hear you liked it! 8D The rain-from-above is my favourite shot too.

[(Anonymous)]

I love you! >_< This is just so much fun to read, let alone look at...you're a genius!
What I always wanted to ask, by the way: What do you study?? I just started Psychology it's quite cool :D

Anyway, please continue MF! I really love it :D

[esperesa]

Thank you! I study History right now. XD Haha, Psychology students always used to scare me. I though they could guess exactly what I'm thinking by just looking at me. Paranoiiid.

I definitely will!

[danicast]

Thanks for the update! I'm enjoying this story immensely! I was missing an update!

[azurefantoccini.livejournal.com]

oh, that little thingies, it delights me @__@
Everything is so realistic, I like picture with the door haha)))

..It makes me feel that I want to come back to my sims pretties too

[lovelyxwow]

Absolutely fantastic editing! I enjoyed reading it. :)

[danicast]

http://simstorylibrary.livejournal.com/5936.html

I hope you don't mind. I think you deserve more love and kudos.

[(Anonymous)]

Really really fantastic!!! I love it! :) :) ... (B34-sims2.blog.cz/en)

[(Anonymous)]

i really like it ... it looks so real; great job!

[esperesa]

Thanks so much! :D