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Yuxi ([personal profile] esperesa) wrote2011-07-18 01:19 am

[Malrennan's Fall] Rewrite, chapter 1 1-9

Hmm. It's been a bit quiet here, mostly because I wanted to finish this before posting anything else. First part of the rewrite of the first chapter. Not much to say about it, except that it's not beta'ed yet because I don't want to bug mah girl in middle of the night and I just wanted the thing online.


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(Anonymous) 2011-07-18 08:36 am (UTC)(link)
Wonderful chapter!))) The pictures are magnificent)
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[personal profile] mjspice 2011-07-18 09:19 am (UTC)(link)
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[personal profile] lovehappyweekend 2011-07-18 10:07 am (UTC)(link)

Thank you for this awesome update! (Also- is it silly if I say I really adored your still life shots. And that rain scene! <3)

(Anonymous) 2011-07-18 10:47 am (UTC)(link)
I love you! >_< This is just so much fun to read, let alone look're a genius!
What I always wanted to ask, by the way: What do you study?? I just started Psychology it's quite cool :D

Anyway, please continue MF! I really love it :D
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[personal profile] danicast 2011-07-20 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the update! I'm enjoying this story immensely! I was missing an update!
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[identity profile] 2011-07-20 07:07 am (UTC)(link)
oh, that little thingies, it delights me @__@
Everything is so realistic, I like picture with the door haha)))

..It makes me feel that I want to come back to my sims pretties too
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[personal profile] lovelyxwow 2011-07-22 06:16 am (UTC)(link)
Absolutely fantastic editing! I enjoyed reading it. :)
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[personal profile] danicast 2011-08-30 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)

I hope you don't mind. I think you deserve more love and kudos.

(Anonymous) 2011-09-11 09:26 am (UTC)(link)
Really really fantastic!!! I love it! :) :) ... (

(Anonymous) 2011-12-20 08:04 am (UTC)(link)
i really like it ... it looks so real; great job!