You've got the outfit right thus far, save for one part: the white collar. It sticks out and loosely overlaps the collar of his black suit. But the dress shoes are definitely of a right color--of black. Maybe add some dirt-over-a-polished-finish type of effect to the black shoes? The white collar is the only thing I'm spotting that's definitely not right (I feel like such a nerd having watched FF VII: ACC so many times lol). Other than that, it's accurate and great so far! I cannot wait to put this on my Reno Sim with mio's new hair. :)

P.S. I do not know if it's possible, (seeing how it's TS2 we're talking about) but if you're able to make it as loose-looking as ya can, I think it would make any Reno Sim look good. ;)