[Malrennan's Fall] Rewrite, chapter 1 14-17

[esperesa]

This again. Still building up to the part where I was before I got the rewrite urge.

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Warning for naked man-arse (no bits).









Do poke me if I somehow got that Russian wrong.

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[maaron]

Gorgeous,gorgeous,gorge-gorge-gorgeous!!!!

[iosiren]

stunning <3

[(Anonymous)]

Fantastic!

[sessions-studiotime.blogspot.com]

HAHA I love his attitude! What a fantastic line (one I'd love to use but could never pull off). No indeed, the person you have reached is not Marwood. Priceless!

I am just swooning over what you've done visually. You always come up with the most astonishing works of art. I'm dying to know what that horizontal line of light is. I've never seen it used anyplace else, and it works so perfectly in that glossy, glamorous hotel room with the disk sitting there next to the ipod. Including the musical notes was genius, kind of fourth wall fantastic.

[ladybird]

Your decoration skills are just outstanding. And your russian is ok, too. ;)

[lovelyxwow]

I can see so much in this scene. Very nice!!

Flawless editing, as always. Every picture is stunning!!!

[(Anonymous)]

May I ask where you got the bed depicted in the background during the phone conversation? It's gorgeous.

Can't wait for the next installment!

Мамадорогая!

[aglaya]

Ух ты!
Oups...
I mean it's cool!
And who wrote that it is not strong in Russian
Poke: You made ​​a mistake the first time, in cloud. Е and Э different letters.

So... He Russian?

Hello

[(Anonymous)]

where can I find those glasses on the table?

[azzy]

Loved it before, love it now =)

[syrosis]

This is just stunning, I have to say! I can't wait for more!

[bolob]

I remember this story from a long time ago, but this is wonderfully done. I like how it's somewhat between a comic and a manga. The characters are very interesting and I love your placement of everything. Absolutely beautiful :D