[Malrennan's Fall] Rewrite, chapter 1 14-17

[esperesa]

This again. Still building up to the part where I was before I got the rewrite urge.

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Warning for naked man-arse (no bits).









Do poke me if I somehow got that Russian wrong.

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Мамадорогая!

[aglaya]

Ух ты!
Oups...
I mean it's cool!
And who wrote that it is not strong in Russian
Poke: You made ​​a mistake the first time, in cloud. Е and Э different letters.

So... He Russian?

Re: Мамадорогая!

[esperesa]

Спасибо! I only know standard words and sentences, but I find it such an interesting language. <3
Ah yes, the text in the cloud is in the Latin alphabet. I wasn't sure what to put there - the translation, the words in Cyrillic or the romanized words - but decided to go with the latter.

Yes, he is! He is supposed to be of Russian/Chinese descent.

Thank you so much for the feedback! :D

Re: Мамадорогая!

[aglaya]

How interesting!
And why only supposed to?

Had not read before so now do not understand a lot. But... Intriguing. It is very intriguing.
Thank YOU! Very very much!