[Malrennan's Fall] Rewrite, chapter 1 18-21

[esperesa]

I finished this late at night and now I have eyebags to my knees, so this is all prone to change. This goes directly after the last few pages.

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In which Xi Hao has to blow off his rendez-vous for business.

Warning for slightly suggestive dialogue and people in their skivvies.









You can immediately forget about the girl now - he will too, probably.

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[mjspice]

Dang. Here I thought she would turn up again. XD

But seriously, I love the expressions.

[esperesa]

Heehee, thank you! The expressions were the most fun of all. I tried to not make them Maxis-like exaggerated, but not blank-faced either.

[maaron]

Woman, you've got to share those bras with the crowd... O__O
And that book...

And as always *breathes in*: thosepicturesarekillingmyeyesbytheirawesomenessYuxiyouarethemostamazinglytalentedpersoninthesimsworldIloveyoutodeath. <3

[esperesa]

It's definitely time for a boobie mesh that doesn't look like it's made by someone with no grasp of gravity. >:|

Theloveisentirelymutual! <333

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[(Anonymous)]

Yes! please, please, please, please, forever pretty please share those lovely bra's! I will sit here and refresh your page until you do! c:

[azurefantoccini.livejournal.com]

I need more of this))) mooore

[esperesa]

Coming right up!

You can immediately forget about the girl now - he will too, probably.

[aglaya]

What he is bad boy))))

Re: You can immediately forget about the girl now - he will too, probably.

[esperesa]

He is absolutely terrible. XD

I love this

[(Anonymous)]

omg,your pics are soo pretty! and please upload that white bra! *drools*

(Anonymus because I don't have a dw)
Rewindedcharlotte - GOS

Re: I love this

[esperesa]

Thanks! And I'm definitely looking into uploading that bra, heh.

[angel77]

Wow, your pictures are gorgeous and I love the graphic novel style presentation, really well done! :D

[esperesa]

Thank you so much!

[(Anonymous)]

Beautiful as always =)

Your picture taking and story telling skills never cease to amaze me =D

Can't wait for the next installment!(sothatImayfangirloverXihaoabitmore <333)

~C.C. (I thought I should identify myself a bit even though you dont know me cause I dont have a DW account ='D But I've been a long time lurker and a huge fan <3)

[esperesa]

Oho, thank you! :D And buahahaha, good to know he succeeded with the ladykiller-vibe!

[bethssimspage.blogspot.com]

She's not very upset about being dismissed, is she? So funny! And it's interesting that her attention is, like his, focused on the book.

I love the way she looks so much like him that she could be his sister. I wonder if that's symptomatic of narcissism. Honestly, I can't blame him!

Wonderful, wonderful shots. I think my favorite is where she's looking through the door at him. That is so absolutely perfect!

[esperesa]

I think she's more annoyed by the waste of her time than anything else. It's a very transient relationship, if you can even call it that.

Oooh, I'm so happy you caught that! I was afraid it would look to much like my sims all looking the same, but that was exactly the thought behind it. :D

Thank you so much for the feedback, as always!

[azzy]

i'm still playing catch-up on your re-write. I just stumbled over this and thought id holla. ^^

[scourgify]

Fantastic. It's been great to catch up your story.