[Malrennan's Fall] Rewrite, chapter 1 22-28

[esperesa]

Back to the dude who may or may not be a good Samaritan. You might spot some recycling if you followed this before - if not, forget I said anything, ho-hum.

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In which Sergei reminisces about days past and Anahon's anticipation makes him edgy.

Warning for a wee bit of gore.















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Comments

[maaron]

Wheee!!! <33

Oh I love it how good yer guys look with their eyes closed..! :''D
Mine---> U__U

If you don't mind me asking, how long does this kind of a mini-comic
take you?? :O I assume it ain't even a few hours job? xP

Once again you brought happiness into my world- I'm sick and am able to breath only through my mouth, delicious. Do I have to say anything about the photoshopping? Naah, it's the same old story, you know it perfectly. awesomegorgeousmindblowing. <333

Oh, and one very important question- Sergei has a teddybear??? :DD

P.S Vincent is le gorgeous<33

His Eyes!

[aglaya]

My darling... His eyes... I have no words... Only emotions...
Thank you, this is something incredible. Love you.

[esperesa]

8D!!
Haha man, them closed eyes are totally drawn on. e_e (The lashes don't move with the upper lid, boo)

Every scene like this takes me a few days. I'm going at a rate of a page per week at the very least, though. Like a snail, haha.

HAY SOUL SISTER, same here! My nose is like a faucet *tmi*. You're the one making MY day here, though <33

Ahahah, it's actually Vince's teddy! I couldn't get it in the shots, but that crate-shelf is hanging above his own bed.

(Thank you luv!)

Re: His Eyes!

[esperesa]

'Tis my pleasure. <3 Thank you, as always!

[sessions-studiotime.blogspot.com]

Sergei's response to Vincent's philosophical monologue about flying and circling the nest was absolutely priceless! Anahon did rescue him. Most of the time those rescues come with at least a couple of strings attached, so perhaps he isn't any worse than any other good Samaritan. Sergei is still alive. Whether or not Anahon really needs his counsel is another matter but I'm giving him the benefit of the doubt.

Your visuals are shockingly beautiful. I don't know any other way to put it. The teddy bear, the glimpse of a child's drawing, and those eyes!

[esperesa]

Haha true, not everyone appreciates constantly having to hear about long-winded internal struggles. Anahon definitely has his own agenda, but he does feel responsible for the both of them.

As always, thank you so much for the feedback! :D

[maaron]

Naah, being a snail is totally cool .3.
Ahaha, I feel yer pain.<33 I believe you feelin' better now? :')) 'cause I do

It's Vince's???...softie... x''D

<333

[mjspice]

:O The eyes pics! Gorgeous! They would make a great avatar too!

[esperesa]

Haha, eyes always look nice as avatars. Thank you!

[keoni]

This really is a great format for a story! I clicked it and then did a little double-take as suddenly those eyes were staring at me, which was kind of creepy, but awesome all the same. It drew me right in.
I loved all of it, you did a great job!

WCIF

[(Anonymous)]

(again and aigain)<-- it's because i'm the source of many WCIF on your site
= =" Well, This is beautiful ! I really love your stories !!!!! And I absolutly love the ??? (I don't know how to say it in english) ; well I'm looking for the black thing the man with white hair has on his eyes (like pirates ! I like pirates).

Thank you very much for help and for every wonderful thinhs you made !!!!!!

Re: WCIF

[(Anonymous)]

Oh...can I also ask you for the white hair ?

I know, I'm annoying.

Re: WCIF

[esperesa]

Aha, the eye patch! Well, I be hoping ye have Bon Voyage, because it came with that EP XD. I used this unlocker though, so it can be taken off in-game. The hair is this one.

[esperesa]

Buaha, mission accomplished! I was kind of hoping they'd have that effect. :D Thank you!

Re: WCIF

[(Anonymous)]

Ah ! Thank you so much (yes I've Bon voyage =] )

[(Anonymous)]

Ah, another great update =D

His eyes are absolutely delicious <3

Cant wait for more!

~C.C.

[scourgify]

The opening sequence...Very powerful. I too was amused by the teddybear. :D