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Yuxi ([personal profile] esperesa) wrote2012-02-23 11:48 pm

[Malrennan's Fall] Rewrite, chapter 1 22-28

Back to the dude who may or may not be a good Samaritan. You might spot some recycling if you followed this before - if not, forget I said anything, ho-hum.


In which Sergei reminisces about days past and Anahon's anticipation makes him edgy.

Warning for a wee bit of gore.

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[personal profile] maaron 2012-02-24 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
Wheee!!! <33

Oh I love it how good yer guys look with their eyes closed..! :''D
Mine---> U__U

If you don't mind me asking, how long does this kind of a mini-comic
take you?? :O I assume it ain't even a few hours job? xP

Once again you brought happiness into my world- I'm sick and am able to breath only through my mouth, delicious. Do I have to say anything about the photoshopping? Naah, it's the same old story, you know it perfectly. awesomegorgeousmindblowing. <333

Oh, and one very important question- Sergei has a teddybear??? :DD

P.S Vincent is le gorgeous<33
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[personal profile] maaron 2012-02-27 08:27 am (UTC)(link)

Naah, being a snail is totally cool .3.
Ahaha, I feel yer pain.<33 I believe you feelin' better now? :')) 'cause I do Photobucket

It's Vince's???...softie... x''D

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His Eyes!

[personal profile] aglaya 2012-02-24 02:35 pm (UTC)(link)
My darling... His eyes... I have no words... Only emotions...
Thank you, this is something incredible. Love you.

[identity profile] 2012-02-25 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Sergei's response to Vincent's philosophical monologue about flying and circling the nest was absolutely priceless! Anahon did rescue him. Most of the time those rescues come with at least a couple of strings attached, so perhaps he isn't any worse than any other good Samaritan. Sergei is still alive. Whether or not Anahon really needs his counsel is another matter but I'm giving him the benefit of the doubt.

Your visuals are shockingly beautiful. I don't know any other way to put it. The teddy bear, the glimpse of a child's drawing, and those eyes!

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[personal profile] mjspice 2012-02-27 10:36 am (UTC)(link)
:O The eyes pics! Gorgeous! They would make a great avatar too!
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[personal profile] keoni 2012-02-29 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
This really is a great format for a story! I clicked it and then did a little double-take as suddenly those eyes were staring at me, which was kind of creepy, but awesome all the same. It drew me right in.
I loved all of it, you did a great job!


(Anonymous) 2012-02-29 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
(again and aigain)<-- it's because i'm the source of many WCIF on your site
= =" Well, This is beautiful ! I really love your stories !!!!! And I absolutly love the ??? (I don't know how to say it in english) ; well I'm looking for the black thing the man with white hair has on his eyes (like pirates ! I like pirates).

Thank you very much for help and for every wonderful thinhs you made !!!!!!


(Anonymous) 2012-02-29 08:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh...can I also ask you for the white hair ?

I know, I'm annoying.


(Anonymous) 2012-03-01 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah ! Thank you so much (yes I've Bon voyage =] )

(Anonymous) 2012-03-10 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, another great update =D

His eyes are absolutely delicious <3

Cant wait for more!


[personal profile] scourgify 2012-03-22 12:51 pm (UTC)(link)
The opening sequence...Very powerful. I too was amused by the teddybear. :D