[Malrennan's Fall] Rewrite, chapter 1 1-9

Hmm. It's been a bit quiet here, mostly because I wanted to finish this before posting anything else. First part of the rewrite of the first chapter. Not much to say about it, except that it's not beta'ed yet because I don't want to bug mah girl in middle of the night and I just wanted the thing online.

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