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[Malrennan's Fall] Rewrite, chapter 1 1-9
Jul. 18th, 2011 01:19 amHmm. It's been a bit quiet here, mostly because I wanted to finish this before posting anything else. First part of the rewrite of the first chapter. Not much to say about it, except that it's not beta'ed yet because I don't want to bug mah girl in middle of the night and I just wanted the thing online.
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[Malrennan's Fall] Prologue 5&6
Apr. 25th, 2011 04:57 pmI really shouldn't be doing sims stuff right now, but I'm a weak, weak thing unable to resist temptation and all that.
This goes immediately after this. Just wanted to make the transition more fluid. My goal is to make at least a page per week, which really shouldn't be too hard. Famous last words.
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♫ Dead Can Dance - Dawn of the Iconoclast
Books rarely sound this epic.
This goes immediately after this. Just wanted to make the transition more fluid. My goal is to make at least a page per week, which really shouldn't be too hard. Famous last words.
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Books rarely sound this epic.
[Malrennan's Fall] Prologue (rewritten)
Apr. 12th, 2011 11:16 pmOkay well, I'll just leave this here. Here's the reworked version of the first few pages for Malrennan's Fall. I like to think it looks more interesting this way. There is only one real plot difference and it's not all that important, but, you know. Pretties.
The old version looked like this, for those who would like to see it: Page 1, page 2.
- Beta'd by Phoen. Thanks babe. <3
Warning for gore. As in dead people. Again.
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The old version looked like this, for those who would like to see it: Page 1, page 2.
- Beta'd by Phoen. Thanks babe. <3
Warning for gore. As in dead people. Again.
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Malrennan's Fall - Introduction pt. 2
Mar. 26th, 2011 02:53 pmSo...I'm redoing what I've done so far, because I figured it would be best to fix the foundations before going on. I've been scrapping/merging a lot of characters because I couldn't keep track. It's nice to see how far you've come, just not if you have to retcon everything - comics are such an unforgiving format.
This goes directly after this, same narrator and everything.
Warning for gore.
( These riots are just the beginning. )
This goes directly after this, same narrator and everything.
Warning for gore.
( These riots are just the beginning. )
